Sunday, May 1, 2016

WEEL 15 DISCUSSION BOARD THREE BIRD BY BIRD READER'S JOURNAL

How is 'Looking around' part of the writing  frame of mind?
The concept of this chapter is that we learn to pay attention and then communicate that through writing. It struck me when Lamott said that it is the job of the writer to present a viewpoint clearly, to see people as they really are and to do that 'we have to know who we are in the most compassionate possible sense.  I think that the compassion we show others gives us a perception of how they are deep down, not just the superficial analysis that we usually make.  Of course to have compassion it works best if we practice that all the time, so that we perceive it all the time in others, not just when we need to access information for writing.  Our compassion can only be fully felt if we have compassion for ourselves though.  It also rings very true when Lamott notes that the conscious mind blocks the feeling of oneness.  Feeling too much slows us down and so we apply our conscious but it distances us from our intuitions and instincts of compassion.  Since we cannot effectively walk around feeling, crying and emoting over all the things that could potentially move us, she suggests we have 'reverence,' and to think of it as 'awe' and 'presence' in the world.  This is important when studying acting too, come to think of it-it helps in personal relationships too.  It seems it would be a good general rule to follow whenever we have the energy and enough attention to apply it.  I also liked the idea that we can see 'a sign of God' and 'holiness... inevitable grace' in the world, though I think that the spiritual aspect can be hard to capture  and illusive.

Do you agree with the Moral Point of View?
Lamott's explanation of the 'moral point of view' clears up an issue that I often wonder about. Lamott says that if we start stories and don't finish them we can then ask ourselves if it is really meaningful to us, or, perhaps we are not invested in what we are writing.  I think that is a valuable thought but I also think that sometimes we (or I) do not face our feeling on a subject and try to slide by on the 'folk saying' that she mentions in the chapter on broccoli. It also clears up confusion that I feel about stating my opinion or evaluation of something.  I hesitate to pronounce myself an authority on anything, surely someone else knows more. But I can tell you my point of view, my specific feelings of compassion and describe an aspect that I think I have noticed that has not been explained with quite the feeling that I have about it.  When I read last pages of the chapter that say, 'a moral position is not a message, it is a passionate caring inside you, I think that I can do that.  I may not be the ultimate authority on anything but I can be passionate and I can care in my own special way.  Lamott says to write about the things that are important to us-love, death, sex and survival- I am not an authority on any of those items, but I can say what, in those elements,  has struck my compassion.

What is the thing that the author calls 'broccoli'
Broccoli, according to Lamott, is the stultifying of our intuitions, our higher selves that we silence with clichè and unoriginal thinking. It is the 'moment of real feeling and insight... that is real and ripe with possibilities'.  'Broccoli' is self conscious dousing of that flame. We were trained to do this because we were 'corrected, humiliated, or punished'  as children for saying what we felt intuitively.  It makes me aware of being compassionate again, with myself, with others, to be encouraging with others.l


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